The Metabolic Toll

By Murdok · 933 words · 4 min read

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The weight of Jax’s body pulled John toward the deck plates. Every step through the wreckage was a struggle against the slick, oil-coated metal and the dead weight of a man who no longer wanted to live. The rhythmic thud of the approaching boots echoed through the corridor, growing louder with every frantic movement John made.

A heavy bulkhead blocked the primary path to the service shaft. John shoved against the twisted steel, his boots skidding on a patch of spilled coolant. The metal didn't budge. He gritted his teeth, the sound of grinding steel loud in the cramped space. He focused on the blue light pulsing beneath his skin. The nanites surged, flowing toward his shoulders and arms. The strength came, a sudden, artificial surge that forced the bulkhead an inch backward, but the cost arrived instantly.

A sharp, hollow ache hollowed out his stomach. It wasn't a normal hunger. It was a vacuum, a sudden, violent theft of energy that left his limbs trembling. His vision blurred, the red emergency strobes turning into jagged, nauseating streaks of light.

"Stay... awake..." Jax wheezed. His head lolled against John's shoulder, his eyes half-closed.

"Shut up and hold on," John said. He gripped the edge of the bulkhead, his fingers digging into the metal.

The tremors started in his hands. They were small at first, a fine vibration that made the Xylos sidearm rattle in its holster. Then they spread to his arms, a rhythmic, uncontrollable shaking that made it difficult to maintain his grip on Jax. The blue light in his pores flared, bright and unstable, casting long, frantic shadows against the corridor walls.

The nanites were working too hard. They were consuming the very glucose in his bloodstream, stripping the lipids from his cells to maintain the structural integrity of his muscles under the strain. He could feel the heat of the process, a searing burn that raced through his veins like liquid lead.

Kestrel's voice cracked through his internal comms, stripped of its usual stability. "John, your metabolic rate is spiking. The nanite-driven exertion is depleting your caloric reserves at an exponential rate. You are approaching hypoglycemic shock."

"I know," John spat, the words tasting of copper and bile. He forced his feet to move, dragging Jax over a pile of discarded tools. "Find me something. Anything."

"There are no nutrient supplies in this sector," Kestrel replied. The AI's voice was a flat, digital monotone, but the underlying static suggested a processing overload. "The rebels have already looted the nearby caches. You must find a way to reduce the load."

John looked down at Jax. The man's breathing was a wet, rhythmic rattle. He couldn't drop him. If he dropped Jax, the approaching soldiers would find them both in the dark.

The heavy, synchronized footsteps were closer now. They rounded the corner of the previous junction, the light from their weapon mounts cutting through the swirling smoke. The beams swept the debris, searching for movement.

John pressed himself into the shadow of a ruptured coolant pipe. He held his breath, the metallic tang of the ship's atmosphere thick in his lungs. He could hear the crunch of heavy boots on broken glass, the rhythmic clatter of combat gear. The soldiers were moving with purpose, clearing the sector.

A beam of light swept over the pipe, illuminating the jagged edges of the metal. John froze. The blue glow from his skin felt like a beacon in the darkness. He forced his muscles to remain still, even as the tremors in his hands threatened to betray him.

"Clear left," a voice barked. It was cold, professional, stripped of all emotion.

"Checking the corridor," another responded.

The footsteps slowed, then paused just meters from his hiding spot. John could hear the heavy breathing of the soldiers, the clatter of their weapons. He could smell the ozone and the burnt plastic from the ship's failing systems.

The light passed. The footsteps moved on.

John slumped against the pipe, a ragged breath escaping his lips. The hunger was no longer a dull ache; it was a ravenous, clawing thing. His vision blurred, the edges of the corridor dissolving into a grey haze. He needed fuel. He needed anything to stop the depletion.

He looked at the wounded man slumped against his shoulder. Jax's skin was pale, his breathing shallow. The temptation to use the very energy the man had left was a dark, flickering thought in the back of John's mind. He shoved the thought away, the revulsion more potent than the hunger.

He pushed forward, the weight of the dying man dragging him down. Every step was a battle against his own failing strength. The corridor stretched out before him, a dark, winding throat of steel and shadow.

He stumbled over a discarded piece of plating, the impact jarring his teeth. He felt the sudden, sharp spike in his heart rate, the frantic rhythm of a dying engine. The blue light in his veins pulsed in time with his pulse, a rhythmic, dying glow.

Ahead, a flickering light signaled the entrance to a maintenance shaft. It was narrow, cramped, and smelled of stagnant water and old grease. It was his only hope.

He dragged Jax into the shaft, the metal walls scraping against his skin. The darkness swallowed them, leaving only the dim, rhythmic pulse of his own bioluminescence. He crawled, the movement agonizing, each inch a triumph of will over the void.

The hunger roared, a silent scream in the darkness. He was running out of time. He was running out of everything.

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